March 2024
Author's Note: Has this happened to you? Someone tells you not to do something, so you immediately want to do it? I think it makes a nice writing prompt: write about something you're told not to write about! I read this poem from my chapbook, On Shifting Shoals, at The Inflectionist Review's Zoom Reading Series in January.
You Can't Put the Red Sea in a Poem
a famous poet warned. If you let it in, your poem is crammed with two million Israelites clutching babies in arms, with satchels of clothes and unleavened bread, and you’ve invited in the enormous weight of a God who punishes evil by slaying slave owners’ children, so here come the Egyptians as God splits open that unmentionable sea just in time for the migrants to cross and closes it right up on the pursuers, and your poem is choking on all those drowning men, flailing horses and wrecked chariots, and next thing you know you have races and nations and power and poverty all spilled in the red ink of misery and your poem is overwhelmed — it’s baffled that He (because it’s always he) never sat them all down and explained this wasn’t what He had in mind those intense seven days he created a world so magnificent poets can’t stop trying to describe it, which is what happened to me when it snowed at the beach at high tide, not just a dusting but a full-on onslaught of snow we hadn’t seen in these parts in years, downing telephone wires and snapping tree branches and power out. When the snow finally stopped and the tide receded, it left a wide strip of sand along the shore, snow mounds piled like crystal dunes on one side and the ocean’s perpetual roar on the other, and in between the tiny miracle of a parting I passed through, kicking scattered seashells like nothing strange and beautiful had happened, nothing that needs to mention the Red Sea.
From On Shifting Shoals, chapbook by Joanne Durham, Kelsay Books 2023
©2024 Joanne Durham
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