February 2021
Bio Note: As a lifetime carpenter my style is rustic, simple but strong. I try to let
the natural character of the wood determine the form. Let the tree surprise us. And so stories, poems.
Author's Note: One time I was invited to give a midwinter reading at a church. When I arrived I discovered it was a homeless shelter. Tough audience. How could I engage them in poetry? This is one poem they related to – locked out, naked, night. And it’s a true story.
Author's Note: One time I was invited to give a midwinter reading at a church. When I arrived I discovered it was a homeless shelter. Tough audience. How could I engage them in poetry? This is one poem they related to – locked out, naked, night. And it’s a true story.
Ski Cabin
Naked, sipping wine under stars among snowy mountain silhouettes, air so silent, so cold, our breath crackles coming in, then floats out in frosty clouds. Fully tenderized, we step dripping from hot tub to deck where fingertips on doorknob discover a.) frigid metal, and b.) locked out. A self-locking door! Towels and clothes left inside for warmth. Barefoot in snow we try each window, and try again. Our bodies are steaming. Already we shiver. “Maybe the neighbors have a key,” I say. We are on a cul-de-sac of four cabins, all dark. Would they rise out of bed, turn on the porch light and open the door to a man clothed only in goosebumps, shaking, hopping ankle-deep in snow? They could call the police while we freeze to death because where is the nearest cop in the Sierra Nevada at midnight? And what is the jail sentence for public inadvertent nudity? I fear frost-bite in delicate regions. “I’ll have to break a window,” I say. Triple-glaze, I see. “Please be careful,” she says shivering, gasping. “I’ll stand back and throw a rock,” I say, and do, with strength I didn’t know I had heaving a hunk of stone the size of a football which makes an astonishing sound like a gunshot of glass. “Watch your step,” she says. In the pitch-black I can’t tell shards from pine cones but at first footfall something pricks, draws blood, as a floodlight erupts from the cabin next door. A young man stands in the doorway wearing only a sweatshirt (Nevada Wolf Pack) while holding a baseball bat, and then a young woman’s voice from behind him says “Put away the bat, Deion, and help them.” The woman steps out wearing flip-flops, a bathrobe, and says, “You don’t look like the bad guys. Come in and get warm.” And that is how we meet our new friends Deion and Kimani who are just normal folks because, really, wouldn’t you do the same?
Originally published in Roanoke Review
©2021 Joe Cottonwood
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