February 2016
Irving Feldman
feldman@buffalo.edu
feldman@buffalo.edu
I retired from the SUNY Buffalo English Department in 2004. Have published a dozen or so collections of poems. Such my addiction to the sport of squash racquets my headstone is to read: "ONE MORE GAME?" See more of my poems HERE.
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Social Constructions of Reality At Coney Island
Social Constructions of Reality At Coney Island
Ideal Disorders Miles of rows of orange trash cans all ah-ing to the sky was somebody's idea of order at Coney Island; another guy thought up the morning crew's ragged line and lowered eyes — the daily stalk of Parks Department foragers in green straggling on heavy shoes and dreamily lancing gum wrappers into gunny sacks. Neither was anybody's idea of fun — which was more like disorder, more like just dropping public verticality for open lolling about and wallowing, down at sea level, off-guard, up-ended; more like everybody getting together and making a sea of "all of us" alive beside the sea, ourselves earth's numberless sands outfacing the mirror shattered below the whole sky, the slow monster under the empty motion. Our being there was beelines over bodies, was shortcuts swarming toward pleasure, and half the fun was keeping it short, and more than fun our thatch and hubbub, our pullulation, of crossing purposes filling the silence on the waters — until, from the groin of comings and goings, at three, at half past three exactly, we hurled off a blanket to the day's height the flying youth and cheering crowd — the sun! — and peopled space with celebration. A New World Torn maps, pages in spume Crashing furniture of the shore The nimble students leaping off, who always from farther out come riding toward us, straddling desktops of the waves — the water's glittering people, the little pilgrims of light. For these wavelets' chancing greenhorns, our parents as they were, our future kids, we the children of immigrants walk in greeting at water's edge and sing out the primer of fresh air: Sky, president of thunder and smiles, many-headed senates of the sea, the jetties' bearded dripping courts, and bully spanked home to his bad castle, old death voted down the cellar stairs. Everything, set free, arrives and shines. All is a globe of recognitions. Every creature of the place — Utah, Kentucky, Idaho — lit with intelligence, glows as if about to speak; wherever we look is looking back with our gazes' own intensity, the sun comes up, the waves come up, asking our names. And who are we, standing around in bathing suits on the brink of everything? We are Americans at the beach. White confusions Springs of the sea-winds' surging — inland toward mountains and prairies, toward happiness. The Gymnasts Legs v-ed out from the groin's nugget — the many figured as a single man. Or the milling centipede of crossed purposes pulling itself together and rising from the ground up, in honor of itself. And not to form the structures only, but to be present in the flesh and confirmed by others present equally to them — leaving as early almost as the sun, they come down from separate rooms, starting from Elizabeth or Hoboken or the Bronx, walking on their hands among us now or spelling out with their spinning persons leaping sentences of cartwheels and vaults. Nearby, the body-builders are defining their "pecs," biceps, "glutes" — glowing maps of somber worlds in single display, so distant that they sink slowly into the background of every sky. But here the gymnasts build themselves together, embody what they illustrate: serenity of power in action, strength moving in matters of common concern; and, by wall or mound or pyramid, by honeycomb, womb, huddle, swarm and tower — these sociable forms, forms of habitation — in the middle of nowhere bestow a sense to everything. The Tower A tower of men, a tongue toward flaming heaven. Now the last one goes up quick, scaling fire to reach the baby in the window of the burning tenement. Everywhere, jealous angels look down. The tower blazes up higher. The faces puff in fury. If we had breath to call him back ... His daring that makes the world come true. — Arms uplifted, he holds the whole sky open, plucks the radiance from the fire, the baby Now from the sky's never! Oh, we gasp, Ah, we breathe out. Just as quick, the tower tumbles apart, leaping every which way down. Their yawp sends them crashing off, shin and thigh, to slaughter waves. And we, set free, have walked away on the sand's radiant reaches. Now the little kids go racing after and smack up geysers, shouting. |
©2016 Irving Feldman