October 2015
Susan Deer Cloud
susandeer@gmail.com
susandeer@gmail.com
I am a mixed lineage Catskill Mountain Indian who has returned to live in the mountains after many decades of living and traveling elsewhere. I call these the Manitou Mountains after the spirit and mists that pervade them, and I feel an affinity for the lingering panther presence here. I knew before I was sent off to school that I had been born a poet and storyteller, and over the years I have had countless poems and stories published in literary journals, anthologies, and books including my recent Hunger Moon and Fox Mountain. I have received such honors as a National Endowment for the Arts Fellowship and two New York State Foundation for the Arts Fellowships, especially gratifying given some of the harder seasons in my life when I created in poverty and solitude. https://sites.google.com/site/susandeercloud/
Author’s Note: Poteen might best be defined as Irish moonshine. My educated guess is that it would make American moonshine seem about as potent as milk. Distilling “fairy firewater” apparently is even now a “cottage industry” in the more isolated and wild northern villages that some people never leave.
Poeteen
That morning in Muckross her man
drove them from the B & B not far
from sea caves they explored
the night before during lingering May
sunset, following village road
more like dirt path until after
a swooping turn they beheld
a cove sun-laved and sparkling
as though Ireland had forgotten
her mists. Such a calm shelter
within the rebel ocean off
County Donegal, luring them
to wade and swim and pick up
shiny stones and shells
for when they were back
in America’s Catskills whose
great sea was lost centuries ago.
She called this one of her homelands,
she with Irish ancestress and feeling
ancient connection to the shamrock isle.
They played in the waters like two seals,
felt metamorphosed into man and woman
when they climbed back up the
low cliff where they met Frank
who turned out to be ninety-one,
a fisherman until three years ago.
They talked back and forth
like the sparkles leaping
across the waves, and when
Frank learned she was a poet
he invited them into his house
to drink poteen with Himself
and Margaret his wife
like him old but young.
O that poteen he poured them,
halfway up the little glasses, clear
as spring water where the fairies
commune by the holy wells.
She sipped the Muckross moonshine
distilled above peat the people
in County Donegal still cut and dug up
for warmth of many kinds.
Frank and Margaret said
it was made of barley when she
marveled over the hint of taste
her tongue could not quite define,
maybe petrol about to glint
into flame. Her mate kept joking
about her seeking the fairies
whenever they stopped at
“those stone circles.” Fierce
she pouted, “We didn’t see them
because of your mockery.
Fairies won’t approach anyone
who doubts they exist.”
Her very first poteen tasting
of the fires of poetry,
of the first time she ever wrote …
and at first she imagined
Frank’s and Margaret’s smiles
and eyes twinkling as much
as the cove that day
had to do with her fairy story.
But then she started sliding
off Earth’s mothering curve,
felt shoulder blades
sprouting wings,
so she put down gently
her little glass and chirped
through lips becoming beak,
“I really appreciate the poteen
you gave me, but if I drink
one more drop I shall see
a hundred fairies dancing!”
Only Herself tweeted “poeteen”
and the dapper fisherman
and his dancing darling
of over seventy years
laughed and laughed.
©2015 Susan Deer Cloud